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PostSubject: deth(or how ever you spell it)   Fri Jan 30, 2009 8:56 pm

man every time i go hunting i dont find anything. fost said walking tordes a clifwaaa!HELP!frost yelled as she held on for her live
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PostSubject: Re: deth(or how ever you spell it)   Sun Feb 01, 2009 2:44 am

{{umm, could you spend a little extra time on your spelling, bad spelling is fine but thats a bit extreme (no offence intended) and mebe a bit more description about what is going on. for eg, Frost is walking towards a cliff (top or bottom?) then she is hanging on..... never knew she fell off.... and hanging onto what??? also, putting chat in "" and thoughts in italics is usually handy (but not needed), also different colors ontop of the italics or speech also helps other readers tell what you are saying/thinking/doing (once again, just helpful, not needed).}}

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PostSubject: Re: deth(or how ever you spell it)   Sun Feb 01, 2009 9:37 am

More like this, Demon. "Man, every time I go hunting I don't find anything," Frost grumbled, walking towards a cliff top. She stared down off the edge, her paws playing with pebbles. Suddenly Frost slipped and fell. "Waaah! HELP!" Frost yelled as he/she grabbed onto a stray branch with his/her teeth. Frost was hanging on for his/her life. Hopefully somebody will come to help me, Frost thought despairingly. All I have to do until then is hold on... That help any? Sorry if I made it a little over-the-top.
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