Verackros the VERY evil wolf

Species (wolf or dog): Wolf, Side; none, kills both

Name: Verackros (vera ack rOs)

Nickname: Vail

Pelt color: see pic

Markings: see pic

Age: 30

Gender: Female

Eye color: amber, shines neon colors

Personality: https://www.youtube.com/v/ZWE4psv12S0&hl=en&fs=1 (i don't know if it will work. tell me if it doesn't)

History:

Strengths: very fast, quick thinker, intimidating, and can coax ANYONE into doing ANYTHING

Weaknesses: Her paws and legs. her main attack plan is to be speedy and to confuse the enemy with sharp, quick attacks and go in for teh fatal blow when the enemy drops its guard or is too dizzy/confused for words. it she gets a leg/paw injury such as a sprain or twisted ancle, she is left exposed and open for attack. she is also blasted to peaces when she thinks of what she was, and of the cold hearted thing she did to her sister.

Other: nothing

Picture(s): working on it

ok, lets see here...

1. Pelt Color, could you please describe her pelt color, i can't accept a character which i have no idea what looks like.

2. the age 30 is a lot for a normal canine.

3. the Personality needs to be a little more than a video.

4. she needs a history

5. the strength "can coax ANYONE into doing ANYTHING" is a little unfair...

6. the weakness "she is also blasted to peaces when she thinks of what she was" i don't think a normal canine can blow herself up

age i think she means in dog years