A Darker Plot

Veila scowled. Corridore was supposed to be here hours ago! If she doesn't get her lazy butt over here soon.. She sighed and layed down on one of the rocks,waiting.

Veilia heard Corridore running toward her. "Veilia -- I mean,my dark ruler! Your plan has failed! Lupo has help by one of our own." Veilia snarled. "Then I will kill them myself. Then,feel free to do what you wish with your sister." "But it's not that easy! He's a good fighter,and both of them combined is..bad!" Corridore seemed out of breath. "Ah,but you forget I am a master of the dark magics." Corridore looked away,ashamed.


((Veilia has plans to rule the world.))

"Corridore. See if you can find Lupo's weakness. That'll help in eliminating her,thus making my plan much easier." "But Veilia! I fought her many times,she's my SISTER. I have never,in over a million years,found a weakness in her. And,she has that Jayn to help her. It's hopeless!" Veilia snarled and gave Corridore a hard whack. She never saw it coming. Corridore gasped in pain. "Never,and I mean NEVER,talk to me like that again. Got it?" "Y-yes,Veili--I mean,dark master. I'll r-return with Lupo's w-weakness." Corridore ran off to find Lupo.


((Yes,I have gone nuts.))

(lol)

Lupo was nearby,scowling a bit. She silently cursed her sister,who was watching her. Corridore stared at Lupo intently,searching for a weak point. Then,she saw it. Her sister was amazingly jumpy,and it seemed that right back leg was one of her weak spots. She raced back to Veilia. "I found it! Her right back leg. And she's jumpy. If one of us could distract her,and the other attack that leg,she's done for!" Veilia nodded in satisfaction. "We'll kill her tonight. Set up a trap."


((This is Veilia. "Ya,I'm ALL that! I WILL RULE THE WORLD! ))

Jayn snarled at them for a hiding place, but he walked away. 'Lupo can take care of herself, she doesn't need help from me.'

That night,the plan was settled. They would wait until Lupo walked inbetween two large rocks,and Veilia would block the only exit. Corridore would then spring out of her cover,and so would Veilia. Veilia would howl to distract Lupo,and Corridore would dart in for the attack. Then,she was done for.


An hour later,Lupo stepped into where she would be attacked. Corridore sprang out from underneath a few bushes,and Veilia stepped into where Lupo had come into and howled a dark,haunting howl. "Goodbye,sister! Wasn't nice knowing you!" Corridore laughed as she sprang while Lupo was snarling at Veilia. Fortunatly for Raven,she heard her sister coming and whirled around. Corridore jumped back and prowled around Raven,attacking from behind. Raven growled and whipped around just as Corridore's jaws would've latched onto her leg,and landed her own bite to the neck. Corridore snarled and they circled eachother,with Veilia watching intently.

(! dang! this is goood! more! n.n)

Jayn heard a bit of noise behind him. 'She's fine, I haven't heard anything terribly bad yet.'

((You want more? You get more!))


Lupo growled and lunged at Corridore,who dodged and leapt back,sailing over her,intent on that back leg. Lupo wasn't giving up that easily,though,and snarled as she turned around and lunged. "Your not getting away with this!" Corridore dodged the attack and rushed Lupo,managing to briefly bite her throat. Lupo growled and tore at Corridore angrily. Corridore let go,her face bleeding. She lunged again and landed on Lupo's back,biting at her neck this time. Lupo rolled over and crushed Corridore,then got up and snarled. "You think you can help that witch,don't you? Well it's not happening!"

(oooh.....so suspenceful!!! moreum! xD)

((lol okay.))

The two were both weakening,but not giving up. Lupo leapt at Corridore,biting her throat and not letting go. Veilia howled again when Corridore got free. "Stop,Corridore! I 'll finish this myself." she said as she slowly walked toward Lupo. Raven snarled. "Give it up,witch. Your not winning." "Is that so? I could kill you right here. But I want to let you know. You failed. The world will be plunged into darkness. And you will be able to do..NOTHING! Because you'll be dead." Raven snarled and suddenly bit Veilia in the throat,letting all her rage into it. Veilia screeched in pain and suddenly went limp. Corridore gasped. "You KILLED her!" "Yes,and guess what? YOUR NEXT!" Lupo leapt at Corridore,killing her as well. She transformed into a raven and flew out of that blood-stained place.

(ooooooooooo *claps hands!!*)

((Thanks! Didn't think it would be THAT good!

(just going with the flow XD)

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(SECONED BOOK! SECOND BOOK!!!!! xD)

((Okie. <works on Veilia's and Corridore's next,darker plot>

((part two will be at Paradise Lake.))

YAY!! one thing first. I'm going to ask you a very inportent qestion that will effect both our live 4 ever. I'm going to be writeing books soon, and i want to know: would you like to be my partner? when we get pay:

If you spark the idea AND help on it: we split the money made by eatch book. say: one book: 20.00 dollers. then people buy six books. we eatch would get 60.00 dollors becuse we split the money by the books.

if you help in the project: we go fifty fifty. (by one book)

You give the idea but dont help on it: one qurtor. (in fraction.)


good bet?

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You like it THAT MUCH? Wow..heh. I can help you out,but you keep the money.))

(well that wouldnt be fair. at LEAST 5 dollers per day if you want. )

((you said "if you want". I don't want. Lol.

(XD ok ok, just dont rebil if i try to give you something, n'k? onc ei get hooked on it, no going back. srry.